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whitedove
Junior Member

since 2005-11-26

Posts 42

0 posted 2005-11-27 05:29 PM

Here is one of my first attempts:

The winter wind blows against my face
The tear weeps, it leaves no trace
My heart expands when I see you gone
It is for you that I will ever mourn

That little girl I once used to be
The quiet girl that was me
Has disappeared, and I cry a tear
Forever in my heart; forever near

I look at photos now many years on
I see the look that is now gone
The tears of sorrow, downward gaze
The darkened avenues; the grey haze

For now I fit another mould
I see rainbows and pots of gold
I look up and see a bright blue sky
I see happiness standing by

The time for joy is here at last
It is here, it comes so fast
The smile of love shows its face
A greatness now in sorrows place.
Whitedove ©

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2005-11-27 06:09 PM

So amazing how we can grow from an experience to be more of us isn't it? Very nice writing, and will be watching for more of your words.

To see real beauty you must look with your heart.
~ Carpe diem ~

whitedove
Junior Member

since 2005-11-26

Posts 42

2 posted 2005-11-27 06:46 PM

Thanks - sometimes the hardest things in life are the things that teach us the most.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-11-27 09:13 PM

"The time for joy is here at last
It is here, it comes so fast
The smile of love shows its face
A greatness now in sorrows place."

Wonderful write...so much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-11-27 10:21 PM

I felt the depth of the hurt and pain of that little girl in this piece~
Thank you for sharing it here with us~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2005-11-28 10:32 AM

Yes there are numerous versions of ourselves that need expression once in a while. Thanks for giving the little girl a chance. Love, Joyce

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

6 posted 2005-11-30 12:06 PM

I enjoyed your post and will be looking forward to more.

Rae

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2005-11-30 12:29 PM

From your soul to our hearts! Thanks for sharing this precious piece.

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