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longte
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since 2005-04-06
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Australia

0 posted 2005-11-24 01:50 AM


Anger

Oh so delicate the touch
Gently feeling for the spot
Sneaking past my outer guard
Trickling; not yet hot

Oozing past my inhibitions
Reaching very deep
Quietly is spreading out
Into my veins now seeps

Unconscious of its machinations
Mood begins to swing
Something’s changed and rearranged
I didn’t feel a thing

Music that was beautiful
Takes on an ugly sound
Temptation like a rattlers bite
As I look around

Coiled inside; relentless
Effortless it climbs
Rage is near upon me
Feeling is sublime
..
.

Live It

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Annie78
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since 2003-10-03
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here then there then back here
1 posted 2005-11-28 09:58 PM


I know this feeling well....great write
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2005-11-28 10:41 PM


Great description of rage. Joyce
whitedove
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since 2005-11-26
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3 posted 2005-11-30 02:22 AM


Great poem - exactly how it feels
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