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0 posted 2005-11-05 09:59 PM






Dark Hawk

Upon the morning airs that rise,
Far overhead, a dark hawk flies.
I watch it hover, wondering,
What fluke of nature chanced to bring
This winged sentinel to my place
And though I cannot see his face,
I feel those piercing eyes must be,
Both watching and aware of me!


He seems imprinted on the sky.
An omen, waiting there on high.
But as I peer, he drifts away
And I go on about my day.
Much later, when I go outside,
A shadow passes in a glide.
I see he's back, far overhead.
The sun is shining on his head.
What can it be that keeps him here,
Within the autumn of the year?


Betty Lou Hebert

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1 posted 2005-11-06 02:19 AM


I like this a lot Betty.  We have the hawks here too and I do believe they stay year around.  love, Joyce
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2 posted 2005-11-06 09:42 AM


This is wonderful!!!!
What a fine poem to read first thing in the morning! What a gift!
love, Barb

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3 posted 2005-11-06 08:45 PM


Dear Joyce:  I was surprised to see this hawk so late in the year, as they mostly have gone to southern climes by now. I always enjoy seeing them.

Love
Betty Lou

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4 posted 2005-11-06 08:46 PM


Hi Barb:  Thanks so much!  Always a treat to hear from you.

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2005-11-22 08:06 AM


Dear Betty Lou

I just love your 'nature' poetry! This poem of yours is just beautiful!

Love Verbena xo


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6 posted 2005-11-22 11:03 PM


Dear Verbena:  Thank you so much! It's a pleasure to share nature poetry with others who appreciate the natural world too!

Love
Betty Lou

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7 posted 2005-11-24 07:41 AM


I'm guessing he's hungry Betty..  

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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8 posted 2005-11-24 07:21 PM


Poem lets you visualise the Hawk perfectly
Great read

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9 posted 2005-11-26 08:23 AM


pegasus111:  You are probably right! Thanks.

Betty Lou

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10 posted 2005-11-26 08:24 AM


longte:  Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed the poem!

Betty Lou

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11 posted 2005-11-26 06:51 PM


BettyLou~
I don't know where I was on Nov. 5 ... but I sure am glad this came around again~

I love the Hawk ... and you write the moment so beautifully~

My love to my Ronnie~
HI RONNIE !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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12 posted 2005-11-26 07:12 PM


Dear Marge:

I love raptors, as well as all other kinds of natural life. It was a strange thing about this hawk as he hung around most of the day and I never did see him dive on anything. It was as though he was just watching our place!
Ronnie says "hi"/
Love
Betty Lou

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