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pegasus111
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0 posted 2005-10-03 03:38 PM



It is easier to believe that love is pure and true
Untouched by the stain of suspicion and doubt
Resplendent in the gown of good intention
Alive and fresh as spring in a mindless bliss
Wrapped in a cocoon of silken innocence

Than to hesitate in that toxic haze of doubt
Concocting answers to questions never asked
Accusing; aroused in soundless indignation
Consumed by the unfounded jealousy
That deprives the heart of tranquil repose

Seek not that knowledge which erodes the soul
Nor the secrets that poison the peaceful  mind
Shun the sly seduction of inquisitive nature
Lest the bridge between two lives crumble
And lie in the dust of shattered dreams

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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junemac
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1 posted 2005-10-03 06:09 PM


I really enjoyed reading this as your choice of words and metaphors is excellent. Such profound sadness and truth in this work and sadly it is oh so very common a situation.
Very nicely written, I am glad I came here and read this one.
Sending Hugs from June xxx  

pegasus111
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2 posted 2005-10-03 08:23 PM


thank you Junemac. You are very kind

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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3 posted 2005-10-03 10:15 PM


Yes indeed Pegasus.  Better to trust and perhaps be wrong than to accuse and be wrong.  Joyce
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4 posted 2005-10-05 01:27 PM


pegasus111;  As usual, a stunning piece of writing!

Betty Lou

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bestgirl911
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5 posted 2005-10-05 08:09 PM


Pegasus...
So often people think they are so happy that something must be wrong that they aren't seeing thus spoiling what makes them happy...so sad but true and you captured it so well....
Best

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6 posted 2005-10-28 11:22 PM


pegasus ...
no bull with this write
the start is pure
and the ending is truth
~wolf

Annie78
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7 posted 2005-12-13 12:37 PM


if i could have just been more maybe he could have trusted. great write as always pegusus.

annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

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8 posted 2005-12-13 07:21 PM


Peggers~
You are a diplomatically romantic wise man~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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