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Trillium
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0 posted 2005-09-07 05:31 PM







Out in the Autumn Air

I climbed above the woods today
To watch the trees all swish and sway.
As autumn breezes swept the land.
I left behind the chores I planned.
The raking and the covering
Of plants that sleep, until the spring.
I watched some birds that soared so high,
Turn lazy circles in the sky.
Hawks or eagles, I couldn't see,
They were too far away from me.

The sun was warm upon the stone
I leaned against and though alone,
I felt no loneliness to be
Away from all humanity.
A marmot called.One scampered near.
They knew I was a stranger here
And as I made my way back down,
Noting shades of bronze and brown
On plants and trees, so lately green,
I thought about the things I'd seen.
Impressed them on my mind to share
When I got home, with loved ones there.


Betty Lou Hebert


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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2005-09-07 05:53 PM


Another of your lovely Nature poems.  You see what the rest of us pass by without seeing.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2005-09-08 09:37 PM


Thank you Joyce! It is definitely autumn here!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Isobel
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3 posted 2005-09-12 06:58 AM


Dear Betty Lou

You have a God-Gifted talent of making me feel as 'one' with nature through your wonderful verses!!!  I thank you for that!

God Bless You!

Love Isobel xo


midnightblues
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4 posted 2005-09-13 09:36 AM


Dear Betty,

Your quiet me-time poem gave me peace in the midst of my busy day.. lovely

Love
MiCheLLe

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5 posted 2005-09-13 09:50 PM


Dear Isobel:  How nice to hear from you here! I'm glad you can come along on these nature walks!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2005-09-13 09:51 PM


Dear MiCHeLLe:  Thank you for reading and glad you enjoyed it.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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