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Brenda Hall
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since 2000-05-30
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0 posted 2005-08-23 12:05 PM



I asked my Grandkids,"If I got really sick and died, how would you remember me?". Grandson (12),Granddaughter (6). I was moved by their response. I want to share this with you.
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WHAT LITTLE EYES SEE

My grandson says I am energetic
When I perform some silly antic
He thinks I am so toally unique
I bet God gave me that special "tweak"

My granddaughter says I'm funny
A little serious, but mostly sunny
She likes it when I buy her snacks
And smiles, as she checks the sacks

I'll cherish "special" thoughts about me
It is amazing what little eyes see
My Grankids truly made my week
I thank God for that special "tweak"

By: Brenda Hall
"thepassionatepoet"

© Copyright 2005 Brenda Hall - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-08-23 12:52 PM


OhBrenda~
I LOVE this ... those precious eyes see so deeply within us, don't they ?

Just put my grandie girlies down for their nappies ... and how I cherish the memories we make each day~

At the lunch table, my three and a half year old, Delaney, said to her mom, "Mom, my ~Poet and I are making a rhyme today !"

They simply make my day ... every day~

Heartfelt penning, Grandma~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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2 posted 2005-08-23 02:56 PM


Brenda:  What a charming poem!  Little ones are so precious and amzing in what they see in each of us and how they relate to us.
I know they are a blessing to you.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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