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junemac
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0 posted 2005-07-27 05:22 PM



A sound carried me,
to carelessness.
Pausing reality,
for a brief frivolity.
Weariness sailed away
on  sweet, soulful notes
The music consumed,
overwhelmed me.
My flesh responded,
to the mighty puppeteer .
I danced,
my heart danced.
Liberty held me
and we waltzed.

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1 posted 2005-07-27 07:02 PM


Nothing like music to carry one away.  Good description.  Joyce
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2 posted 2005-07-27 07:21 PM


SweetJune~
Sounds heavenly to me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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The One & Only
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3 posted 2005-07-27 09:31 PM


When I hear some songs it take me back to a place i once new, thanks for doing that for me again and reminding me how much i long for that song!!
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4 posted 2005-07-27 11:44 PM


Deaar June:  Some music seems magical in the effect it has on us. This was a good example of that.

Love
Betty Lou

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junemac
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5 posted 2005-08-28 12:18 PM


Thanks all, I just got back from my holiday in Tunisia and need to catch up with reading poems, will be back soon.
Hugs June xxxxxx

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