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theinkquill
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since 2005-07-15
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Texas

0 posted 2005-07-17 06:19 PM



THANK U

Every night before I close my eyes
I get down on my knees
Thanking God for all that we have
For all the times just like these
And if one day I should not wake
I hope that you know just how much you mean
Because if it wasn’t for you in my life
Lord knows where I would be

I want to thank you for blessing me
Sometimes the miracles you do I can’t believe
When I was down and out all by myself
You were there by my side you never left
When I was blind and I thought that I couldn’t see
You were there as my eyes to guide me
And when my soul got weak just about to fall
You were there, saw me through it all

I’ll never let go of what we have
Some many seek only to never find
But each waking moment begins with you
The only thoughts on my mind
I will never fade into the dark shadows
Nor will I get wrapped up in myself
Its not about me, its all about you
You’re the reason behind the things I’ve felt

So I want to thank you for being there when the world seemed so cold
It was you who through me the rope, said hold on don’t let go
Just when I had taken all I thought I could stand
You reach down I the mist of despair to lend a helping hand
Even when I fell in life, no strength to keep trying
You refuse to give up on me, eased the pain enough for me to stop crying
I couldn’t have gone on without you
So the one that was there all along I say Thank You


Copyright ©2004 Trent Brooks http://www.realitypoetry.com


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-07-17 07:28 PM


Trent~
Firstly ... welcome to PiP and the Corner Pub~

Now THAT'S the kind of loving poetry we want to see~

Thank you for being so understanding on the 'other'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2005-07-17 08:21 PM


Yes welcome Trent.  Nice poetry.  joyce
theinkquill
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since 2005-07-15
Posts 38
Texas
3 posted 2005-07-17 09:24 PM


i'm glad you both enjoy my poems. i will be a regular here. i enjoy surrounding myself with other creative writers

iq http://www.realitypoetry.com


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