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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-07-02 02:09 AM

Love so true,
And so pure,
That heaven was set here,
Before it went up skyward,

Grains of sand does not show,
The love I have received,
Filled with joy,
As if lost in paradise,

I close my eyes,
To make sure this is not a dream,
And once again it’s there,
Love in its entirety,

Kiss me and make me forget,
That you are real,
Want to be lost with you,
In your each beat,
Your soul and mine,
Kiss over again,

The times we spend together,
Are never lost,
For you were there,
And the world felt right,

Each thought filled with you,
Your touch, and taste,
Your kiss, and your smell,
Engulfs my every sense,

My lover, sit next to me,
And let me tell you,
How sweet you are,
Your simple smile-
Makes the sun blush,

Don’t look away,
Just hold my hand-
And enjoy this instance,
No worries and no
Need to hurry,

Your fire and mine,
Now burn as one.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-07-02 09:57 AM

Ronil~
That's just plain purtemous !!

Such a sweet share of the heart~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

2 posted 2005-07-02 05:58 PM

Extremely beautiful poem. I found it very romantic. What a loving soul you are.
Hugs June x

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

3 posted 2005-07-04 10:29 PM

Such a beautiful piece! I haven't read anything like this in awhile, I am very impressed!

If this is true to life, I hope you showed it to your special person!

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

4 posted 2005-07-07 07:37 AM

another amazing and moving piece ronil.... i also hop ethat this goes to your muse and special person they must be an amazing person to have captured such emotions...
well written and keep more coming
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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