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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2005-07-01 09:57 PM



A Lack Of Words

I sit down to write
A beautiful poem for you
But the words don't come
Loneliness is all around
I am feeling mostly down

7-1-05

© Copyright 2005 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-07-01 10:01 PM


Ah Sue, I'm sorry you're feeling down.
But, it is so good to see you posting...
I miss you here.
~Heart hugs coming your way, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2005-07-01 10:10 PM


Hope tomorrow is a better day!  Enjoyed your post!

Trillium

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2005-07-01 10:21 PM


I like this
and can relate to how you feel

hugs
and chin up
tomorrow is another day

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2005-07-01 10:26 PM


SweetSuzieQ~

Well ... I think it's downright puuurrrtttyyy~
Soooo ... see, you've done a lovely Tanka
that expresses so much~

Wishing you were here ... we'd go fishing !!
I'll bet that would cheer us BOTH up !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

SmartChick
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5 posted 2005-07-01 10:39 PM


Thank you all for reading and replying.
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6 posted 2005-07-01 11:09 PM


A good poem, for having such a lack of words

I think you said just enough. If you need more, it will come later, I promise

Enjoyed!

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

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7 posted 2005-07-02 02:06 AM


A lot said in a few words.  Love, Joyce
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