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SPIRIT
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California Desert

0 posted 2005-06-17 10:08 AM



…write me

There will be a time
When I am nothing but a photograph,
Or a small paragraph, in a closed book
Within the library - of your mind…
A less than significant part of your past,
A mundane thought in your today
And a selective memory - in your future.

I will be a story expanded upon
…becoming a legendary tale
……of little truth and many lies.
You will add a little,
then take away a little,
In an attempt to balance
All that was good and what was bad in me.
You will re-arrange the chapters of my life,
Until I am no longer - who I ever was.
I will be a fully unfamiliar individual,
One of your own creating
On an empty page
Within your imaginative mind.

I will become nothing more
Than a distorted image - a storybook character
Standing in view of the ’Funhouse’ mirrors
In the titled book The Carnival of Life.
Past, present and future - however you perceive me
Or write me…so I will be.

But then, if the truth is to be acknowledged
You never have really known me,
For I only allowed you to see
A very limited view of who I am.
Even I have not been shown the whole me,
I am as an unfinished novel
Written by many unknown writers,
And printed white on white with an inkless quill.

I am nothing more than a stranger
Even unto myself
…an enigma in the reality of the day,
The forgotten past and the unforeseen future.

You will be the storyteller
…write me.


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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2005-06-17 10:49 AM


This is a wonderful piece.  If we are remembered long at all, we will not be remembered in total.  Spirit, so glad to hear from you again.  Love, Joyce
SPIRIT
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2 posted 2005-06-17 11:09 AM


Thanks Joyce - hope you are keeping well (...and thus the history books are written).
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2005-06-17 12:29 PM


Dinah~
This is WONDERFUL !!!

'write me…so I will be'

... and thus you are~
So good to see you back with us~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 2005-06-17 01:37 PM


SPIRIT:  Thanks for treating us to such a terrific poem!  Good to see you posting again. It's been too long.  What you write is so true! We are constantly changing in some way and are unfinished works of art!

Betty Lou

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5 posted 2005-06-17 02:28 PM


This is wonderful....so truthful.  I never really thought of it like that.  Thank You.

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


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