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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2005-06-03 04:58 AM



I need to write, to speak, to think
I need to come back from this brink
I need to know that what I say
Is heard by more then myself today
I need to have some small reply
And need to know this isn't some lie
I need to know I will get through
And not just to some like me and you
But that my fights and battles fought
Are for more then me, and not
Counted as some small thing
Because this life is not some fling
Just tell me I'll survive
Then I'll stop my compromise
To start this fight again
Because it must be better then
Living in a shallow shadow
I think that is what my life is, though..
A mockery of what it should be
In tears, thats how you'll find me
So now again I'll step back
And let you contemplate what I lack
Just to ask for your advice
On how to get over this hills rise
The only thing I know that is true
Is if you help me now, later I'll help you

Your time is here.  Take one last look at it, then never come back.  This part of your life is already over...

© Copyright 2005 Angel - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2005-06-03 01:47 PM


Angel~

Well ... I'm here to tell you, pretty lady,  that you WILL SURVIVE ... as a poetess you have a *gift* ... to poetically share your feelings and thoughts with others ... AND ... at that you definitely succeed !!!

Keep penning, gal ... you know that I love seeing you here~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
2 posted 2005-06-04 12:38 PM


This is sad but take it from me, things will get better and joy will flow again.  Meanwhile you can write touching poetry like this.  love, Joyce
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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
3 posted 2005-06-04 02:14 PM


No matter how bad things look at the moment, there is always a better tomorrow coming. We are usually made stronger by the trials we go through.  You have many friends here and people who really care about you and we are all hoping to see you in a happier mood soon! Be strong and know you are not alone!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

PatAngel
Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451
California
4 posted 2005-06-04 11:58 PM


Dear Angel,

Take it from a someone who has been through the mill and back. Whatever life throws you, you will make it through. You are not lacking a thing dear one.

I was quite touched by your poem, that I wanted to reach out and give you a hug.

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
5 posted 2005-06-08 12:15 PM


And so a kindred spirit speaks to me across the dark abyss
She cries out for understanding and comfort,
a soothing word
Be not afraid gentle one for we are with you in this wilderness
You will never be alone

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Annie78
Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469
here then there then back here
6 posted 2005-06-29 11:44 PM


Angel,
first let me say that i am so very happy to see you back...i have missed you much more than i can tell you....next let me tell you that you touch so very many of us with your gentle spirit....you have a gift....and next let me say that the trials and tribulations are always there, but good things do come from them, and sooner or later they pay off. you know how bad my year started out, and i can tell you that it is now turning out to be one of the most spectacular time in my life. and lastly you were there for me when i was in dire need...i am here should you need to vent, cry, scream, yell, laugh, or whatever.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

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