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Corner Pub #2
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DeviantMechanic
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since 2004-03-27
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Oak Grove, KY
0 posted 2005-05-03 09:40 PM

Woe is the meager
But never he who all sees
For meager shall own
Lands seen only by clouds height
As a justice for meager's plight

Rotor Tramp.
In science, all things are relative,
In love, None.
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DeviantMechanic
Junior Member
since 2004-03-27
Posts 21
Oak Grove, KY
1 posted 2005-05-04 03:15 AM

i like this son but one too many syllables in last line
Mom

Rotor Tramp.
In science, all things are relative,
In love, None.
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