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0 posted 2005-03-28 06:26 PM






The Mustang Years

I've come back to the desert,
Where I came long years ago.
My pal and I caught horses
For a traveling rodeo.
We learned to know the secrets
Of this mighty, awesome land,
A-trailing after mustangs
And we got to know each band!

Now some are gone to bullets
And the winters take some too
And some are gone for dog food
With their hooves made into glue.
Some of them are rounded up
And adopted out, they say,
But some still roam this country,
For I saw their tracks today.

Lying here upon the ground
And just staring at the sky,
I guess it must be raining,
For I don't know how to cry.
My cheeks are wet with something,
I suppose it must be tears,
Reliving all the memories
Of those vanished, mustang years!



Betty Lou Hebert

Published by Rocky Mountain Rider Magazine 2002

© Copyright 2005 Betty Lou Hebert - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-28 06:30 PM


oh my lady!!  I love this one!!  so sad what we have done to some of the wonders of this wonderful land.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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2 posted 2005-03-28 06:36 PM


pegasus111:  Thanks for reading!  I wrote this many years ago when we lived in the high desert of Nevada.  The wild horses were our neighbors and we loved watching them. Some of them became quite friendly and they were all beautiful.  Now there is a bill passed to round up thousands of them in Nevada.  For no good purpose I'm afraid. Some of them are being shuttled into Wyoming to save them.  So many eyes are closed to the beautiful creatures they are.

Betty Lou

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3 posted 2005-03-29 12:00 PM


gorgeous. amazingly done final stanza.

the first was weak becaues the ryhme was too sing song but damn you pulled it off well.
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its always that way isn't it. "progress" for what? more people, more money, more more more when the things they throw away are the very ones worth having.

-majnu
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4 posted 2005-03-29 12:48 PM


i used to live in nevada too, and what they have done to the mustangs and other creatures there makes me well what it makes me is better left unsaid at least here. i have a girlfriend who adopts like you said so they say. i have yet to see one at her place. this is a lovely piece.
Annie

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5 posted 2005-03-29 01:36 PM


majnu:  I think you pretty well summed up the situation! Thanks for reading.

Betty Lou

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6 posted 2005-03-29 01:38 PM


Annie:  The worst thing I've heard recently about treatment of wild horses in Nevada, occured a few miles from Reno.  Three young men.........2 of them marines on leave........went out into the desert and shot over 30 wild horses, some of them just colts. Some of them were sprayed in the face with fire retardant! They got off with a slap on the wrist!  Some of the mares were in the process of giving birth. It almost makes me cry just thinking about it!

Betty Lou

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7 posted 2005-03-29 05:40 PM


Dear Betty.  I've read about the plight of the wild mustangs and I know that good hearted people have tried to adopt and remedy the situation but it is ever so there are some who delight in torturing wild creatures.  There has been news accounts recently of slaughtered eagles in our state.  It's beyond my comprehension.  Your poem is well rendered.  Love, Joyce
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Dear Joyce:  I have been reading about the poaching of eagles in your area lately and it's really sad!  Such beautiful creatures and doing no harm to anyone. I fail to understand the mentality of the people who do such dreadful things.!

Thanks for reading.
Love
Betty Lou

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9 posted 2005-04-10 06:48 AM


THE FOREST AND THE WIND

When I was young I listened, to the music nature sang
Sounds of silence whispering, from when the world began
Soft and gentle were the songs, remembered from the past
In the beauty of a lightning storm, I heard the trumpets blast

I felt the happiness and joy that only nature brings
Felt the welling up inside, as I heard the birdies sing
The trees were my companions, in those long gone days
Soft clouds upon a mountain top... a valley,,, mist and haze

The water in the giggling stream was cool and crystal clear
Butterflies were rainbows.... flitting through the air
A maze of wildflowers blooming... in a meadow way up high
An eagle,,,, solitary,,, alone.... majestic in the sky

Now I walk back through the woods to hear the lovely song
Instead I hear her moaning "Please leave me alone
You silly greedy fools....You're killing me you know
You're tearing me apart... Which everybody knows
Your Want and your Polution... Make me sing this way"
It should Never be like this.... Thats all I have to say"

So I gaze into the Giggling brook... Now its full of scum
Remember with a teary eye... the song when I was young
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its a shame we refuse to learn from our mistakes

Live It

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10 posted 2005-04-10 03:00 PM


longte:  Thanks for "gifting" me with your meaningful poem.  I hope you will post it where everyone can read it! It deserves to be read by others!

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2005-04-13 03:52 PM


this is terribly sad but I'm glad I read it

this one will stay with me for a good long while

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12 posted 2005-04-13 09:31 PM


passing shadows:  Thanks for reading.  It is even sadder, because the fate of the wild horses is in the balance.

Betty Lou

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