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Perfect World

DeviantMechanic
Junior Member

since 2004-03-27

Posts 21
Oak Grove, KY

0 posted 2005-03-26 09:26 PM

I offer mortal thoughts
in a world of immortality
the perfect world in my mind
A world you wont see
My ideas called witchcraft
My thoughts reffered as a hoax
But i think no one knew
My life is no joke
If you look deep in my mind
No thought of gleeful song
My actions derived from pain
Everything i did was wrong
My wrists now a gushing wound
my eyes filled with tears
the perfect world in my mind
now has dissapeared.

Annie78
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 469
here then there then back here

1 posted 2005-03-26 11:02 PM

such pain here...i never knew.
Mom

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2005-03-27 12:12 PM

I hope it is the poet writing this and not life. Joyce

DeviantMechanic
Junior Member

since 2004-03-27

Posts 21
Oak Grove, KY

3 posted 2005-03-27 08:59 PM

Momma Thanks again, and Joyc3e, no worries, life was hard for some, i was just their outlet, and these words were mine.

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

4 posted 2005-03-28 08:13 AM

a desperate piece. hopefully not actual experience but, pain is, after all, a part of life.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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