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jjote
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since 2002-12-25
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0 posted 2005-02-25 07:41 PM


Your image
captivates my mind.
As the last wisps of sunset
seduce the sky with vivid pinks,
memories past flash by -
your hand in mine,
my lips to yours.

Once more,
one last time,
while twilight flees,
I surrender meekly
to the slow rush of darkness,
and I recapture you.

[This message has been edited by jjote (02-27-2005 06:45 AM).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2005-02-26 01:10 AM


Very nice.  Joyce
midnightblues
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2 posted 2005-02-27 03:54 AM


Sweet!

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2005-02-27 11:27 AM


Josefina~

'As the last wisps of sunset
seduce the sky'


What an absolutely LOVELY thought~
I greatly enjoyed the imagery in this piece~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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TexUS
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4 posted 2005-03-06 11:56 PM


A beautiful image.

Well done, thanks!

LadyDracaWolf
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since 2002-09-19
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5 posted 2005-03-16 12:04 PM


Very pretty. Well done.

Death is not extinguishing the light;
it is putting out the lamp
because the dawn has come.

Rabindranath Tagore
Poet, Philosopher

pegasus111
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ocala, fl, usa
6 posted 2005-03-17 04:08 PM


ahhh..  romance..how sweet thou art!!

lovely read..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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