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tecoyah
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0 posted 2005-02-12 10:05 AM


Wrote this awhile back....while visting Family in California


Pacific

Mist kicked up by gusts
Far off places leave their scent on beaded drops
This ocean is mine
Each cracked angle of foam that never stops
Licking rocks to sand
Ever making patterns on my beached mind
Floating natures toys
Buried in your breath for me to find

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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2005-02-12 03:55 PM


a nice interpretation of the ocean and its wonders.  joyce
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2005-02-12 09:48 PM


tecoyah:  I certainly can see and hear the Pacific in your poem.  It does speak to people in many ways!

Betty Lou

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3 posted 2005-02-14 01:03 PM


I have an ocean near me...I think I'll go there soon...it's been awhile.
Italy Angel
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4 posted 2005-04-18 01:56 AM


I love this! The ocean is one of my favorite places! Thank you for sharing!
Annie78
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5 posted 2005-04-18 02:11 AM


the ocean fills me with wonder...one minute so calm and then out of nowhere it is boiling and angry. just to calm down again' i like the calm, but will stand in the rain all night to watch the storm roll with the waves, showing no mercy for anything. some how calms me when it is at its worst temper tantrum being throw.
Annie

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