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Beasley
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Cheboygan,MI USA

0 posted 2005-02-06 01:23 PM


One Sunny Day

Trees shaped like lollipops
Stand in the sun
While their russet, ripe branches
Hold leaves by the ton.
They shadow the lawn
With much needed shade;
Children run ‘round
And merry is made.
The morning is gone,
It was dressed in pink hue;
It stole away night
With a mantle of dew.
Ah! But my daydream
Is not such a go
My sun-covered valley
Is drenched white with snow.



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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2005-02-06 04:23 PM


Dear Barb: Lovely images and rhyming! I enjoyed it very much!

Love
Betty Lou

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2005-02-06 08:47 PM


I like this and you know your image will come true.  You just need to be patient.  Love, Joyce
passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-02-07 01:44 PM


nice
TexUS
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4 posted 2005-02-22 12:37 PM


I'm dreaming with you!
Still looking at the snow for several weeks to come...

Enjoyed your poem, thanks!

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
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North Carolina
5 posted 2005-02-22 08:04 AM


What a lovely picture you have painted here. And before long those lollipop shaped trees will be covered with tons of leaves and giving you lots of shade. I really enjoyed this.
Jules

Isobel
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6 posted 2005-02-26 04:39 AM


Dear Barb

A lovely verse!  Dreaming is a form of imagery!  How less stressed our lives would be if we could just for a few minutes a day escape to where our 'dreams' take us!

Love Isobel


midnightblues
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7 posted 2005-02-27 03:57 AM


Dear Barb,

lovely imagery! I LOVE IT!

Love
MiCheLLe

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