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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2005-01-15 02:28 PM


Saved by the Bell (Pun intended)

We know as we release them here,
Our words of love of hope or fear,
That as they move along the track
We have no power to bring them back.

Will they be scanned by friendly eye
And then deemed worthy of reply
Or will they move along,ignored
Dismissed by readers who are bored?

We check to see how they have fared
Our inmost secrets we have shared;
One last goodbye before they die
As into cyber space they fly.

To our surprise we find them there
At top of page in good repair.
Redeemed by one who wished them well;
Their guardian angel, Isobel.

Thanks Isobel, Joyce


[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (01-15-2005 03:19 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-01-15 04:31 PM


I guess Joyce, that we all just want to be acknowledged in one way or another. Your writings are always lovely. Chris

You said you'd give me light-
But you never told me about the fire
Stevie Nicks

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2 posted 2005-01-15 09:53 PM


Dear Joyce:  Cute poem and Isobel is always kind in her remarks!

Love
Betty Lou

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Denise
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3 posted 2005-01-16 03:19 PM


Very cute, Joyce!
Isobel
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4 posted 2005-02-05 03:33 AM


Dear Joyce

Is this poem dedicated to me?  If it is then you surely have touched my heart and soul!!!  I don't know whether to laugh or cry!!!

Thank you dear poet friend!!!

Love Isobel


Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2005-02-05 11:21 AM


Yes indeed dear Isobel, this poem is for you.  I was so afraid you weren't going to find it.  Love, Joyce
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6 posted 2005-02-05 05:15 PM


yep, there are some great poems that come up again and again. It's wonderful to read them especially since some of us weren't here when they were originally posted.
I remember finding some of your wonderful story delights as I scanned through the archives.
Love, Barb

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