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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2004-12-01 04:42 PM


~*~

I wrote the cinquain about God’s kisses some time ago,
but what good are kisses without hugs? So, I
decided to write a new cinquain about God’s hugs
and, now, you can enjoy both.

God's Hugs


(Cinquain)

Beyond the deep,
Moist canyon shrouding sneaks
Angel’s breath, arctic mountain sheet,
The fog.


-Lighthouse Bob

God's Kisses


(Cinquain)

Outside your sleep,
Soft window tapping speaks
Love whispers, honeysuckle sweet,
The rain.


-Lighthouse Bob


~*~


© Copyright 2004 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2004-12-01 05:22 PM


They're both right from your loving heart, Bob.  Love, Joyce
Annie78
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2 posted 2004-12-02 09:53 PM


how very appropriate to feel the fog and rain in this way. maybe explains why some of us are so at home in this kind of weather
Annie

midnightblues
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3 posted 2004-12-03 04:53 AM


Oooh how lovely! This is indeed a perfect way to marvel at the beauty of God's gifts and His tender love!

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2004-12-07 05:48 PM


Smiles brought to me from all three of your kind responses. Thank you. -Bob
passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-12-12 04:41 AM


excellent!
Lighthousebob
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6 posted 2004-12-13 10:09 AM


Thank you passing shadows. I do love your pen name. -Bob

Broken_Winged_Angel
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7 posted 2004-12-14 07:48 PM


Beautiful

Your time is here.  Take one last look at it, then never come back.  This part of your life is already over...

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