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Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
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0 posted 2004-11-12 04:36 PM



ride a wild line of road

ride it fast and hard

make it scream with your passing

make it know who you are


stop along that serpentine

and see the sunset red

drive on madly through the night

and gather old bones dead
ride the highway til its gone

until the stars melt with the dawn

until the morning burns the dew

and scorches memories that you knew


ride until your journey's end

until spirit up to heaven sends

its final fleeting breath of life

free at last....of pain and strife


ride.

" and I dream of her always,
even when I don't dream.
her name's on my tongue
and her blood's in my stream."

'Christmas in Prison' John Prine

© Copyright 2004 Adam M.M. Stevanovic' - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2004-11-13 05:55 AM


Dear Adam,

wow! what a ride its going to be!
but I'm game for it!


Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
2 posted 2004-11-15 09:56 AM


Whether on a horse or harle, in a car or truck.. or just walking along riding a pair of nikes   you've captured life well in this.

Thank you *hugs*

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

3 posted 2004-11-15 10:45 AM


impromptu addendum

" ride your wild nikes, Angel

make them sing like valhallan hounds

make them fly like hallowed valkyrie

let your spirit know no bounds "

-hugs-


" and I dream of her always,
even when I don't dream.
her name's on my tongue
and her blood's in my stream."

'Christmas in Prison' John Prine

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
4 posted 2004-11-15 11:32 AM


If only life was that easy!!!

*hugs* Did you get an email back from me?


Solstice Son
Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

5 posted 2004-11-15 02:06 PM


BWA~ not that I can see.....

send it to this one

rustyhalodirtywings@hotmail.com



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