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Broken_Winged_Angel
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Small Town, Somewhere


0 posted 11-03-2004 10:02 PM       View Profile for Broken_Winged_Angel   Email Broken_Winged_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Broken_Winged_Angel's Home Page   View IP for Broken_Winged_Angel

You've no idea
The cost of sitting here
And smiling, showing you love
Because when I do this
Give you my love unconditionally
It opens up my heart again.
That place that is bruised
Hurting beyond belief...
The place that love is stored
And goodbyes are swallowed
Like a bitter pill...but still
Swallowed..to let others move on..
You don't comprehend the cost
Of loving you because you haven't
Lost as much as I have.. or maybe you
Have lost as much...in a different way
Maybe you're me in a different guise
Could be that you've lost as much
Or an equal amount.. Perchance you've
Seen that dark abysess.. right before
Your soul says goodbye for good
And you've nothing left to wish for
When you lay everything on the line
And know that you will get nothing
Not a cent in return..not a shadow
Not a glimpse of the hope you had
Wishing upon a faint star long ago
Maybe you've been here and done that
And in that maybe...maybe we'll both
Find a salvation long lost, but looked for
Then we'll be able to hold our heads up
Instead of hidden, with tears falling
And maybe the love we speak of is real
Not a dream after all... Time will tell
Until it does, be patient.  I don't know me
So how could you know me? This hurt
This pain..this push you away..
I will run yet still hope you will be here.
Save me from myself please.
I have no god to ask.
I do not believe.
Believe for us both
Or we're both lost.
Forever.
© Copyright 2004 Angel - All Rights Reserved
Solstice Son
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1 posted 11-11-2004 02:34 PM       View Profile for Solstice Son   Email Solstice Son   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Solstice Son



2dalimit
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since 02-08-2000
Posts 2217
Mobile, AL


2 posted 11-11-2004 06:28 PM       View Profile for 2dalimit   Email 2dalimit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2dalimit

You've no idea
The cost of sitting here…
This hurt
This pain..this push you away..
I will run yet still hope you will be here.
Save me from myself please...



Lot of emotion here.
Melton
Annie78
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since 10-03-2003
Posts 460
here then there then back here


3 posted 11-19-2004 01:39 AM       View Profile for Annie78   Email Annie78   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Annie78

this is most definitely one that i should not have read tonight, but with everything gone now just had to see what save me save you was. i feel this way and don't know if it will ever get any better. Nice job!!!
Annie 78
passing shadows
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4 posted 11-20-2004 06:10 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

there are some that will understand
yes
Annie78
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here then there then back here


5 posted 12-17-2004 03:18 PM       View Profile for Annie78   Email Annie78   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Annie78

how is it that you know my soul, and my heart so well? Angel thank you sweetie.
Annie78
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since 03-10-2001
Posts 10059
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6 posted 12-17-2004 03:25 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

Sad and emotional.  Love, Joyce
Kuwabara
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since 11-21-2005
Posts 5
NH, USA


7 posted 02-24-2009 11:21 PM       View Profile for Kuwabara   Email Kuwabara   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kuwabara's Home Page   View IP for Kuwabara

It's been almost 5 years.. and I'm still so powerless, I'm sorry Angel...

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