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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2004-11-03 10:02 PM


You've no idea
The cost of sitting here
And smiling, showing you love
Because when I do this
Give you my love unconditionally
It opens up my heart again.
That place that is bruised
Hurting beyond belief...
The place that love is stored
And goodbyes are swallowed
Like a bitter pill...but still
Swallowed..to let others move on..
You don't comprehend the cost
Of loving you because you haven't
Lost as much as I have.. or maybe you
Have lost as much...in a different way
Maybe you're me in a different guise
Could be that you've lost as much
Or an equal amount.. Perchance you've
Seen that dark abysess.. right before
Your soul says goodbye for good
And you've nothing left to wish for
When you lay everything on the line
And know that you will get nothing
Not a cent in return..not a shadow
Not a glimpse of the hope you had
Wishing upon a faint star long ago
Maybe you've been here and done that
And in that maybe...maybe we'll both
Find a salvation long lost, but looked for
Then we'll be able to hold our heads up
Instead of hidden, with tears falling
And maybe the love we speak of is real
Not a dream after all... Time will tell
Until it does, be patient.  I don't know me
So how could you know me? This hurt
This pain..this push you away..
I will run yet still hope you will be here.
Save me from myself please.
I have no god to ask.
I do not believe.
Believe for us both
Or we're both lost.
Forever.

© Copyright 2004 Angel - All Rights Reserved
Solstice Son
Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

1 posted 2004-11-11 02:34 PM





2dalimit
Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
2 posted 2004-11-11 06:28 PM


You've no idea
The cost of sitting hereā€¦
This hurt
This pain..this push you away..
I will run yet still hope you will be here.
Save me from myself please...



Lot of emotion here.
Melton

Annie78
Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469
here then there then back here
3 posted 2004-11-19 01:39 AM


this is most definitely one that i should not have read tonight, but with everything gone now just had to see what save me save you was. i feel this way and don't know if it will ever get any better. Nice job!!!
Annie 78

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-11-20 06:10 PM


there are some that will understand
yes

Annie78
Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469
here then there then back here
5 posted 2004-12-17 03:18 PM


how is it that you know my soul, and my heart so well? Angel thank you sweetie.
Annie78

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
6 posted 2004-12-17 03:25 PM


Sad and emotional.  Love, Joyce
Kuwabara
New Member
since 2005-11-21
Posts 5
NH, USA
7 posted 2009-02-24 11:21 PM


It's been almost 5 years.. and I'm still so powerless, I'm sorry Angel...


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