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Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
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Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2004-10-14 01:22 AM


my bride

once upon a time
there was a love poem here...
now it is empty
same as the poet...
~~~~~~


[This message has been edited by Tramp Poet (10-15-2004 05:27 PM).]

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2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
1 posted 2004-10-14 10:52 AM


…through sickness and health, for better or for worse… but most of all, for GOOD.

Thanks,   Melton

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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
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Washington State
2 posted 2004-10-14 03:03 PM


I don't know how much more it would take to prove that love is true.  Good luck.  Joyce
Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
3 posted 2004-10-27 01:31 PM


(blinks) I must need to read up or back more or something.... Are you okay Tramp?
Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...
4 posted 2004-10-27 04:39 PM


lol that would be the $64.00 question...
as was said in "Pulp Fiction" ...
"no pretty ******* far from ok..."
but on the mend and with God's help
able to overcome and go on...
don't like airing laundry in public,
yet how can one write poetry and not?
Trying hard to seperate the daily ups and
downs of life with the art and not doing
very well...one of the occupational hazards
of a poet i presume...when one lives for love and finds inspiration in love and to have that love ripped away...kinda puts a crimp on one's writing to say the least, eh?
and yet if one doesn't write about those intense emotions, one denies the richness
of the experiences, right?
lol one confused and dazzed kitty here...

Annie78
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 469
here then there then back here
5 posted 2004-11-12 06:56 PM


Baby, my dream is to but give you the fullness once again so you are not empty
yur bride

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