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junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk

0 posted 2004-09-08 10:49 AM



Random thoughts whirl in my head,
like scraps of paper on the wind.
Trying to catch them - impossible.
Elusive butterflies of my mind.

If I could just hold them still,
scoop them up - hold their wings.
I could write beautiful poetry,
about life, love and many things.

© Copyright 2004 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
Posts 451
California
1 posted 2004-09-08 06:15 PM


Oh June,

You do just that! Your write such beautiful poems.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
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2 posted 2004-09-09 01:47 AM


Yes inded you do.  You catch these elusive thoughts and transcribe them beautifully.  Joyce
Beasley
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since 2003-11-28
Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA
3 posted 2004-09-09 08:18 AM


Okay, June, I think you got them scooped up because you are writing beautiful poetry.
Love, Barb

msflame
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since 2002-05-21
Posts 188

4 posted 2004-09-09 11:18 AM


OOh, I think you already wrote beautiful poetry. I love this. So soft and gentle thoughts. Thank you!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2004-09-14 01:33 PM


I know how ya feel
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