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PassionatelyRomantic
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0 posted 2004-09-02 06:36 PM


Behold thy beauty whom lies in solace wait,
'neath these skies of summer's date.
Oh how thy love draws thee nearer-
to such beauty, earthly treasures, are so mere!

So great is thy beauty- the rose lives in shame,
for such is love, this passion inflamed.
Two passions in love, death cannot touch,
for such is beauty, and loves too much!

© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
junemac
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1 posted 2004-09-02 06:46 PM


Wow this is passionately done. A wonderful romantic poem. Brief but full to the brim. so few words so much to say.

Amazing write. I love this.
Hugs June x

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2 posted 2004-09-03 02:55 PM


This poem certainly lives up to your penname.  Joyce
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3 posted 2004-09-06 01:18 AM



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4 posted 2004-09-07 03:23 PM


This is truly beautiful writing!  
gringakiwi
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5 posted 2004-09-07 10:21 PM


can you ever love too much? astounding poem, and very lovely.
PatAngel
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6 posted 2004-09-08 06:10 PM


Wonderfully written! Thank you for sharing!

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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