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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2004-08-28 02:48 PM


( I'vebeen depriving myself of sleep for two weeks to watch these wonderful athletes from all over the world.Kudos to all of them.)


Olympic Games

I watch with fascination
as they anounce the names
of those who've won the medals
at each part of the games.

The National Anthems ring out;
they can't hold back their tears
at triumphant affirmation
of practice packed long years.

My own favorites, the gymnasts
in steeled determination
have used bodies as swift missiles,
proudly for their nation.

Each and everyone's amazing;
a shame they can't all win.
I wonder how they concentrate
through crowd's approving din.

The swimmers, divers, racers, keep
me watching, mesmerised.
As many records fall and break,
I'm happily surprised.

No competitor's a loser.
United with the world,
we applaud, it makes no difference
which flag will be unfurled.

The clock is striking midnight,
I'll stay for rising sun
if there's one more game to finish
or one more race to run.

If rulers could learn lessons from
these finest of the best,
they'd ban war forever, holding
games to disturb our rest.

By: Joyce 8/28/04

© Copyright 2004 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Mysteria
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1 posted 2004-08-28 03:42 PM


No competitor's a loser.
United with the world,
we applaud, it makes no difference
which flag will be unfurled.

You are so right about the last stanza as well, a dream would be in world unrest they have games to settle it, instead of war, and loss of lives would it not.

Not one of those to me either was a loser, just imagine the years of training it took to get even that far.  Nicely dedicated Joyce.

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2004-08-28 04:14 PM


Thanks Mysteria.  We've missed you here.  Love, Joyce
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3 posted 2004-08-28 10:50 PM


Dear Joyce:

A most fitting poem and I join you in your admiration for all the athletes!

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2004-08-29 12:28 PM


Joyce~
Oh yes ... these have been some outstanding Games~
You have done them proud with this~

I have such admiration for any and all who devoted years of determination and training to get where they are today~

*Side note*
Delaney loved watching the gymnastic girls perform.
She says she wants to be a "bimnastic"~
*and again, we

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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5 posted 2004-08-31 05:51 PM


Excellent topical write. Applauds !!

Hugs June x

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6 posted 2004-09-02 07:51 AM


If rulers could learn lessons from
these finest of the best,
they'd ban war forever, holding
games to disturb our rest.


I didn't watch too much of the games. But, for the ones that I did, I feel the same as you about their excellent performance. I enjoyed your tribute.
Your wish would indeed be nice.

Thanks,   Melton

PatAngel
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7 posted 2004-09-02 10:25 AM


What a wonderful poem! You did a fantastic job!

Love,
Patricia

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For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

msflame
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8 posted 2004-09-03 02:17 PM


Good read.  I also enjoyed the gaames (more than football anyway
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9 posted 2004-09-03 02:17 PM


Good read.  I also enjoyed the gaames (more than football anyway
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