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Trillium
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0 posted 2004-08-27 03:51 PM







Things As They Are

Did I not notice yesterday
The flowers start to fade away?
The yellow leaves upon the lawn.
The bobbing ouzels now are gone.
Did I not see the shrinking pond,
Or how the foliage beyond
Has thinned to let in much more light,
Or did it happen overnight?

Did I not sense the change of air.
The signs of autumn everywhere?
Were my thoughts someplace so far
I couldn't see things as they are?
Now suddenly, I look around
And see the changes, so profound.
I am surprised and wonder why
I didn't feel the summer die!


Betty Lou Hebert

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1 posted 2004-08-27 08:28 PM


Very nice Betty.  The changes do happen very fast sometimes.  My oak is glorious one day and bare the next.  Last year we had a sudden freeze and the next day the ginko leaves were falling just like rain and gone the next.  It's nice that every season has its beauty so we don't feel so forlorn.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2004-08-27 08:39 PM


FriendieGirl~
This is just MARVELOUS~
Of course here in my little Florida world, we are planting flowers today !!
Love this penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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3 posted 2004-08-28 12:37 PM


Dear Joyce:

Thanks.  We have had so much rain for the last week and I hope we get a bit more summer!

Love
Betty Lou

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4 posted 2004-08-28 12:38 PM


Dear Marge:

The pictures of the girls with their flowers are precious!

Thanks for commenting on this poem!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

PatAngel
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5 posted 2004-08-28 01:07 AM


Dear Betty Lou,

What a wonderful poem! Thank you for sharing.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Isobel
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6 posted 2004-08-28 07:06 AM


Dear Betty Lou

A beautiful poem about the changing of seasons going un-noticed.  Some seasons are gradual from one ending and another beginning but other times I feel that our lives are so busy that we notice less.

Love Isobel ox


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7 posted 2004-08-28 04:42 PM


Patricia:

Thanks for reading and I always appreciate your comments.

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2004-08-28 04:43 PM


Dear Isobel:

So nice to hear from you today! Thanks for commenting!

Love
Betty Lou

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9 posted 2004-09-06 01:21 AM


nice write
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10 posted 2004-09-06 03:24 AM


passing shadows:  Nice to hear from you and hope you are safe from the storm!!

Betty Lou

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