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Brenda Hall
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since 2000-05-30
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Texas,USA

0 posted 2004-08-27 12:48 PM


What are you doing on this glorious day
Are you at work or indulging in play
Whether happy or whether you're blue
A special time to offer a Prayer or two

Praise God for the fact that you are alive
And Praise God again at the stroke of five
A warm peaceful feeling brings you afresh
As you and God truly and sincerely mesh

When droopy eyes falter into the deep
Thank God for this day as you fall to sleep
As slumber sets in at the end of prayer
Honestly, ask yourself,"How was your day?"

By: Brenda Hall
"thepassionatepoet"



© Copyright 2004 Brenda Hall - All Rights Reserved
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2004-08-27 03:52 PM


Brenda:  I really liked your poem and it's true that every day is a gift we should be thankful for.

Betty Lou

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msflame
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2 posted 2004-08-27 03:59 PM


Brenda, praise him indeed. This is such a gentle expression of faith. many blessings your way
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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2004-08-27 08:30 PM


Well said.  Joyce
PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
Posts 451
California
4 posted 2004-08-28 12:53 PM


Brenda,

A truly lovely faith-filled poem! I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing!

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

2dalimit
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Mississippi coast
5 posted 2004-09-02 08:04 AM


When droopy eyes falter into the deep
Thank God for this day as you fall to sleep
As slumber sets in at the end of prayer
Honestly, ask yourself,"How was your day?


Excellent read. Thanks for the reminder. Melton

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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uk
6 posted 2004-09-02 06:44 PM


A wonderful write. Aperfect thought.
Lovely. I enjoyed this very much.
Hugs June x

gringakiwi
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Posts 189

7 posted 2004-09-07 10:18 PM


a lesson in that we all should be thankful. No offence but you reminded me of my lovely grandmother! great write.
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