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junemac
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0 posted 2004-08-07 06:49 PM


September in twighlight

One part water - five ink

Strange parting of day

Scooped up with fuzzy heat

Dreams like feathers blow

Hovering upon the mood

Of silvery blue shadows

In September twilight


© Copyright 2004 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
PatAngel
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1 posted 2004-08-08 02:28 PM


Wonderfully descriptive words! I really enjoyed it.

Love,
Patricia

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For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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2 posted 2004-08-08 05:37 PM


Beautifully penned.  Joyce
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3 posted 2004-08-08 06:16 PM


junemac:  A lovely description of twilight in September.

Betty Lou

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4 posted 2004-10-11 10:40 AM


June~
Flipping through some back pages and finding that I miss you~

Lovely, lovely thoughts here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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