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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2004-08-06 11:43 PM

I saw you
I know I saw you.
and you looked away from me.

I wanted
I wanted your love
but you couldn't give me it.

You hurt me
but I hurt you too,
Maybe I deserve much worse.

I love you
I really love you
But you drove away from me

I needed
Needed your forgivenes
but there was none to receive.

I hoped for
Hoped for your return
but you never did return

You left me
you left me behind
To chase and scream behind you

I'm sorry
Sorry for chaos:
But I'm not sorry for me.
Juju-

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

1 posted 2004-08-07 06:39 PM

this is sad and well written and shows a lot of pain. I loved the last line of this poem. very powerful !!
hugs June x

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

2 posted 2004-08-07 07:30 PM

Dear Juju,

Such a heart-felt sad poem! It really touched me.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

3 posted 2004-08-08 02:57 AM

Nice write

Keep it up

Eliza Simmons
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2004-08-08 12:24 PM

Thank you guys!
This was a hard one for me to write, because its tough.
Juju

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

5 posted 2004-09-04 04:21 PM

wow...this mad eme cry as i read it, becuse i am going through the same thing. He is moving over this weekend, and a couple weeks ago, we both hurt each other really bad, and it hasnt been the same since. I cry almost every night.

This was an amazing write. Cant wait to read more.

KArissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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