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PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

0 posted 2004-08-04 01:48 AM

Valley of Enchantment

In the distance, a river flows
down a gently sloping valley,
where abundant wildflowers
gather dew in the early morning hours.
A cool breeze whispers it's music
as blades of grass sway to its tune.
A cerulean sky, devoid of billowy clouds,
creates a vivid picture of the heavens
in all its wonderous glory.
In the stillness of this magical place,
a newborn fawn rests at its mother's side,
nursing sweet nectar as she gains her strength.
Nestled beneath an old oak tree,
are two of God's creations, totally free.
A land where no man has yet to invade,
an enchanting valley as far as the eye can see.

August 3, 2004

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-08-04 02:12 AM

My kind of place, PatAngel! Much enjoyed this beautiful scene.

......jo

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

2 posted 2004-08-04 02:24 AM

Thank you Iliana for your wonderful words.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

3 posted 2004-08-04 08:23 PM

I could clearly see everything you described. Sounds like a wonderful place to be!
-Peaceful

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2004-08-04 08:34 PM

An alpine meadow perhaps? Lovely picture in words. Love, Joyce

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

5 posted 2004-08-04 11:57 PM

Thank you Jennifer and Joyce for your sweet comments. Sometimes I dream of an idealic place far from civilization, where the only sounds to be heard are those of nature.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Beasley
Senior Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA

6 posted 2004-08-05 08:21 AM

This is such a "rich" poem. The peace and serenity just pour out of it.
Love, BArb

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

7 posted 2004-08-05 09:55 AM

Dear Barb,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-08-06 11:32 AM

a beautiful description

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

9 posted 2004-08-06 07:26 PM

hehe now i feel all warm and tickly!!!

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

10 posted 2004-08-07 06:41 PM

Oh so beautiful. What a gorgeous scene you paint with these words
wonderful !!! I love your poetry
hugs June x

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

11 posted 2004-08-07 07:27 PM

EagleScorpion,

Lol! I never thought my poem would elicit a warm and tickly feeling. It made me smile reading your words. Thank you!

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

12 posted 2004-08-07 07:28 PM

Thank you dear Joyce for your wonderful comment on my poem.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

13 posted 2004-08-08 12:30 PM

Good write!

Juju

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