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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2004-07-25 12:07 PM


Eternal Thoughts of You

How long does a scent candle last?
How long does a hug good bye last?
How long till I see you my friend?
Happy time passes on so fast, yet it will last.
Today is just as happy as yesterday.
You are always next to my heart.
Just a moment within my thought,
Enlighten my world that was crumbling down.
Oh seeking your resemblance in reflection of window pane.
Oh how I think of you in every situation everyday.
I pray that you will think of me at night.
Yesterday is yesterday,
Yet my heart still, stay in youth.
Remember my childhood friend, you,
Whom I always can lean on when troubles come.
Though communication isn't available,
In Christ we are one; in Christ, love binds us.

(c)July 7, 2004
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2004 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-07-25 12:54 PM


goodbyes always last too long, I think

good write

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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2 posted 2004-07-25 06:57 PM


this is a very nice write. I hate goodbyes.
Hugs June x

PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
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3 posted 2004-07-25 07:18 PM


Dear Eliza,

Very moving words! Instead of good-byes, we should be saying, "until we meet again." I've hard a hard time with that one, having to say goodby to my son Michael. I believe in my heart that one day we will meet again, when I am called "Home".

Thank you for sharing!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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4 posted 2004-07-25 10:10 PM


thanks for sharing pat angel about ur personal experience in goodbyes. May peace come upon ur heart.

Eliza Simmons
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

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