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junemac
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0 posted 2004-07-24 06:40 PM



Lay me once more on Red tartan
feed me strawberries and wine
Kiss my lips and taste the sun
trail fingers gently over my skin

Take me once more to summer
tartan, course beneath my flesh
let me taste your strawberries
and the passion from deep within.

Remember the the mighty oak?
The heat inside us like sun?
Lay me down under your shadow
Love me with strawberries and wine.

© Copyright 2004 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2004-07-25 02:01 AM


Very provocative.  Joyce
junemac
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2 posted 2004-07-25 07:01 PM


thanks Joyce. I was hoping it would be more kind of romantic and only a little provocative.ah well .... long summers ands sweet memories.
Hugs June x

PKreturns
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3 posted 2004-07-26 08:30 AM


provacative...and sweet. Nicely done June.
junemac
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4 posted 2004-07-26 08:45 AM


thanks
hugs June x

aussie teen
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5 posted 2004-07-27 06:55 AM


this is beautiful june... even though its winter here in australia, it may as well be summer with the weather were getting... again a beautiful piece that is stirring vivid memories of previous relationships... thankyou for sharing this amazing piece.
Mel

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PatAngel
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6 posted 2004-07-27 12:43 PM


Very beautiful June! Reminds me of a love I once had many years ago. Ah, but quite provocative! I loved it!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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