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PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21
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New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2004-07-22 05:02 PM


Through all the years, I still think of you
My dreams, they are still about you
My mind wages war with my heart
You’ve become a memory, at least it’s a start
A song, a phrase, a certain smell
Can trigger such reactions in this hell
I know that I am only mortal man
And these feet tread upon a shaky land
We sat on the hill, watching the sun go down
The joy was just having you around
Thousands of hours go by like nothing happened
The strength of your face held in my head lessened
But after the hatred and confusion dims
I wonder if you’re really happy with him
I think that maybe you think of me still
Because I know, I always will
Though my feelings were so strong then,
There were others before, since, and will again
I try not to compare them to you
It is simply all that I can do
Now I’m left a little stronger and wise
To view the world with not so innocent eyes
I’d like to spend some time again with you talking,
Through the familiar paths while walking
Reminisce for a while, then say goodbye;
This time forever, as you vanish from my eye


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with you
1 posted 2004-07-22 05:06 PM


they never leave our hearts, do they?

PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
Posts 451
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2 posted 2004-07-22 11:06 PM


The heart never forgets, even with the passing years. Having only loved once, I wonder if I will ever experience that feeling again. I can relate to your poem, for the words went straight to my heart.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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3 posted 2004-07-23 05:35 AM


this touched me so deeply. I have no words for you other than thank you for sharing this .
Hugs June x

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4 posted 2004-07-23 07:10 PM


We can never forget a real love.  Joyce
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