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peaceful_dreamer
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since 2003-04-25
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SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

0 posted 2004-07-17 01:54 AM


She
Sat so
Still on her
Hilltop looking
Over her old
Rusty town preaching
To the world how
Life should be
Lived. She
Sat
By her
Self In her
Large world of thoughts
Ready to grow wings
And never
Return.

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

© Copyright 2004 Jennifer Pederson - All Rights Reserved
PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
Posts 451
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1 posted 2004-07-17 04:26 AM


Peaceful_Dreamer,

This is very good! I especially enjoyed the ending.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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2 posted 2004-07-17 08:30 AM


yep..I really liked this one
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