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PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21
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0 posted 2004-06-29 01:14 PM


We’re supposed to be so wise
Through ages we are ‘civilized’
Our actions deny our very words
Fight for the voices unheard
Eagles ablaze, and crashing down
Phoenix in flight, he takes his crown
Shapeless hands reach for the sky
Only to wither away and die
To transcend this medium of bondage
It’s for us all but, a minority’s sacrilege
Keeps us hanging from edges of a dream
To where darkness sheds bluish gleam
Before and after, here and now
Forgotten oath, forgotten vow
He who hath the esoteric power
Shall rise up and claim his hour
It is at hand, the hourglass is done
From the East, the Phoenix faces one
The crown, the scepter, the golden ring
All will now bow before the Altar of the King


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junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
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1 posted 2004-06-30 04:09 AM


wow this is really powerful. I enjoyed it tremendously. Your imagery in this one brings it to life really well.
Hugs June x

PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21
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2 posted 2004-06-30 08:02 AM


Thank you June.
midnightblues
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3 posted 2004-07-01 12:17 PM


very interesting! i really like it

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21
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New Orleans, LA
4 posted 2004-07-01 12:54 PM


Thank you Michelle...

Jerry

PatAngel
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5 posted 2004-07-04 02:06 AM


Pk,

This is really wonderful! Wow, you really are good!

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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