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Dedreia
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Kokomo, Indiana, United States

0 posted 2004-06-28 02:29 PM



Missing you so desperately
Sitting here alone
My mind wanders
Remembering the words we've shared

Wishing you were here
I hug myself
Pretending it's you
It makes me tremble just a little

I try to remember
When I started to feel this way
It escapes me for the moment
I wonder if it was meant to be

Two hearts finding each other
Needing the other
Both lonely and broken
Sad and alone

Friendship is soothing
It fills in the cracks
Slowly healing our hearts
I am so glad I found you...

"It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen

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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2004-06-28 02:36 PM


Dedreia:  Good friends are priceless and I hope that;s the kind you've found! I liked your poem.

Betty Lou

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2 posted 2004-06-28 02:40 PM


Dedreia~
It is so nice to see you and read this lovely piece~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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PKreturns
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New Orleans, LA
3 posted 2004-06-28 03:48 PM


Great portrayal of reaching out across time and distance...
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Member Rara Avis
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Washington State
4 posted 2004-06-28 04:41 PM


Friendship is a very precious gift to receive and give.  Love, Joyce
PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
Posts 451
California
5 posted 2004-07-04 01:46 AM


Dedreia,

One of the greatest blessings we have is friendship. Beautiful poem!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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Singapore
6 posted 2004-07-04 12:56 PM


Dear Dedreia,

Friendship is soothing
It fills in the cracks
Slowly healing our hearts

that is so true, how wise and strong you are dear girl

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
7 posted 2004-07-04 12:56 PM


Dear Dedreia,

Friendship is soothing
It fills in the cracks
Slowly healing our hearts

that is so true, how wise and strong you are dear girl

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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