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Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25
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0 posted 2004-06-19 02:30 AM



the tune

my morning coffee
was sweetened
by the hums of an old tune
not heard or thought of in years
curious how it came
quite sudden
quite softly
buzzing so warmly
from behind the news

in the afternoon heat
while sipping a tea
i found this old tune
still locked in my soul
why now does it come?
to take me?
to taunt me?
or maybe just spend a day
as a friend?

tonight drinking scotch
in the ice i saw rainbows
swirling in time
with an old ceiling fan
the tune still held fast
as i stumbled
towards cover
wondering if sleep
would bring her back?

© Copyright 2004 Mike Powers - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2004-06-19 02:35 AM


I understand this.  There are times, old tunes won't go away.  Joyce
Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-06-19 11:11 AM


I dig it,,,,,Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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3 posted 2004-06-21 04:10 PM


what a beautifully written poem. I love the language of memories you played through this one. I find your poem so very readable. A story in such a small poem. wow !!
great.
Hugs from June x

Panne
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since 2001-01-31
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South TX, USA
4 posted 2005-02-04 12:11 PM


Mike,

This is so well done.  Wonderfully expressed.
I love the theme and the tune thing I believe has happened to most of us so we can all relate.  But your ending - that it related to lost love- was a surprise for me - I wasn't expecting that to be the ending. Most melodies that come from nowhere to me and bother me all day are just an annoyance but the lost love idea was terrific and like a said - a surprise, a nice surprise.  Thanks for the read.
Panne

Denise
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5 posted 2005-02-04 07:10 PM


Very well expressed, Mike! I'm sorry I missed this before, but glad I didn't miss it this time!
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