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Dedreia
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 172
Kokomo, Indiana, United States

0 posted 2004-06-09 02:30 AM


Come back my heart screams
as you make your departure.
I feel my heart bleed a little
everytime you leave.
Your prescence comforts me
in ways I can't explain.
There's a tenderness in your words
they fill me with love...

How I long to hold and be held.
Two hearts together.
As if no other existed in the world.
Maybe on that beach, watching the sea of waves..
No words passing between us, none are needed.
Arms wrapped around each other.
Absorbing the love from the other.
Bringing forth healing spirits...

"It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen

© Copyright 2004 Dedreia Savoy - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2004-06-09 10:04 AM


Very nice Dedreia. Joyce
junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
2 posted 2004-06-10 05:16 AM


An incredibly gentle love poem. I can tell it is heart-felt.
Wonderful words. I wish I could write love poems this well.

Hugs from June x

PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
Posts 451
California
3 posted 2004-06-27 12:41 PM


Dedreia,

What wonderful heartfelt words! Beautiful!!

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
4 posted 2004-06-27 10:54 AM


Dear Dedreia,

thanks for sharing. I love it

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21
Posts 362
New Orleans, LA
5 posted 2004-06-28 01:16 PM


You speak of things we all strive to put into words. Nicely done.
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