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Beasley
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0 posted 2004-06-01 08:04 PM


Give Me Five

A chartreuse goose and a hot pink dog
Wandered around in the tangerine smog.
The smog cleared away and up in the sky
The sun winked in lemon with lime in her eye.
Lavender clouds started to squirt
Pink raindrops that were sassy and curt.
The colors all dangled outside of the lines
Tainting red daisies and green porcupines.
Indian chiefs wore a headdress of blue
And grey crocodiles began to chew
Gum that bubbled and then they all blew
Bubbles in gold,big round and really bold.
The kindergarten painted a poem
And when it was over, they all went home.

Barb Gedman


© Copyright 2004 Barbara Gedman - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-06-02 03:01 AM


this is adorable!
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2 posted 2004-06-02 10:01 AM


You're outdoing yourself. Joyce
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Member Patricius
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3 posted 2004-06-02 12:43 PM


Dear Barb;

You definitely dream in technicolor!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2004-06-03 11:30 AM


Barb~
Awwwwwwww, this is just SO CUTE~
Wonderful rhyme ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Isobel
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since 2004-01-17
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Qld, Australia
5 posted 2004-06-07 07:57 AM


Dear Barb

A 'colourful' verse.

Aren't children wonderful.  They are so imaginative at five.  It is a shame that as they grow older most of them lose that imagination.

Love Isobel


junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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6 posted 2004-06-09 03:16 AM


Now thats what I call creative !!!

wonderful, magical and colourful poem.
I loved this one very much and it painted a rainbow for me. Very clever !!

APPLAUSE !!

Hugs from June x

PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
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California
7 posted 2004-06-27 12:34 PM


Dear Barb,

Your poems always bring a smile to my face. Such creative talent!!!!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

midnightblues
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8 posted 2004-06-27 10:47 AM


Love it!! wish i was there

Love
MiCheLLe


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