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Beasley
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since 2003-11-28
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Cheboygan,MI USA

0 posted 2004-05-29 12:17 PM



Now Hear This!
Mrs. Hummingbird went on vacation.
She was filled with hope and elation
At seeing her relatives and her friends,
The neighborhood and its newest trends.
She packed a suitcase and carry on bag.
Mr. Hummingbird started to drag
Along golf clubs and a cooler for beer
But changed his mind; coulda been fear.
Mrs. Hummingbird gave him a look
It wasn’t one that he mistook.
Never mess with the hummingbird gaze,
The evil eye or the eyelid raise.
Say “yes dear", don’t mess around.
This rule applies to all species in town.

Barb Gedman


© Copyright 2004 Barbara Gedman - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
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Singapore
1 posted 2004-05-29 12:20 PM




very chirpy indeed! Aww Barb you have such a great sense of humor, and did I mention that you are so very talented?

Love
MiCheLLe

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Trillium
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2004-05-29 04:25 PM


Really cute Barb!  I wouldn't want to argue with a Rufous hummingbird!  They're mean!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Isobel
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since 2004-01-17
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Qld, Australia
3 posted 2004-05-29 09:40 PM


Dear Barb

You sure have a great sense of humour and a wonderful imagination.  Nice write.

Love Isobel


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2004-06-03 10:51 AM


Barb~
Just too, too cute you are~
Love it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
Posts 451
California
5 posted 2004-06-06 12:37 PM


Dear Barb,

A truly delightful poem!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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