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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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mountaintop taken to the mountaintop sweet, insincere words false promise of hope sweet kisses in moonlight whispers of desire love once again, oh joy! sharing the creation words of beauty, peace heart flying oh so high someone once a friend calls with accusations “how could you betray me” dreams destroyed again again, again, yet again crushed into nothingness giving, oh so much giving returned is shadows welcome home loneliness. taken to the mountaintop just to be tossed off falling tears like bitter rain time to take a stand time to make a demand love or leave me alone... ~~~~~~~~  |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes, time for this battered heart to rebel. Great writing. Joyce |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well expressed, Daniel! |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
I like it  poignant Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Great write Daniel! Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
I'm so filled with grief again knowing that my words were seen as insincere, and knowing that once again I am the object of your pain. So much for the mountain top which I was climbing at the time. Annie |
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