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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2004-05-14 12:38 PM



I said to the month of May
Why don’t you stay?
But in her final days of glorious display
The gentle nod of a summer breeze carries her away.
Oh how she loves the blue eyes of the summer sea!


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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2004-05-14 03:46 PM


So many good things are fleeting.  Love, Joyce
Dark Angel
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2 posted 2004-05-14 05:13 PM


Oh this is lovevly BloominRose, unfortunately for us Down Under... May's disappearence brings us winter.. brrrrrr.

Thanks for warming me up with this.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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3 posted 2004-05-14 06:04 PM


BloomingRose~
Ah, dear lady ... indeed, my favorite month out of the Florida year, with October running a close second~

Lovely to see you, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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BloomingRose
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4 posted 2004-05-15 07:28 AM


Joyce~ Fleeting yes, but she'll be back! Lord willing. Thanks!

Maree~  Here's wishing you a soft summer breeze...can we dream? Thanks for your lovely comment.

Marge~ Also living in Florida, I understand the love of May, and the cool breath of October. Love ya girl!

PatAngel
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5 posted 2004-05-15 03:00 PM


Blooming Rose,

Very lovely poem! I too, wish the month of May would linger a bit longer.

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-05-16 04:28 AM


good piece
midnightblues
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7 posted 2004-05-16 11:03 AM


Deb: this is lovely! and poignant too.. great expression

Love
MiCheLLe

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