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rainingwithsun
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since 2004-05-06
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Toledo, Ohio USA

0 posted 2004-05-07 08:29 PM


Oh how my heart aches everyday
the tears they seem to flow,
It does not matter what I do
they do not seem to go

As I look around my world
it all seems black and white,
for all the color in my life
has become the dark of night

My heart is broke so badly,
my soul has drift away,
for I miss my darling so
I long for end of day

© Copyright 2004 Scott Dolbee - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-05-07 10:07 PM


Scott~
Such a tearful poetic emote~

Welcome to Passions ... we are addictive !
You'll see~

Thank you for the nice comments on my pieces.
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2004-05-07 10:21 PM


Hope this is just a passing phase.  Love, Joyce
rainingwithsun
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since 2004-05-06
Posts 19
Toledo, Ohio USA
3 posted 2004-05-08 08:24 AM


Thanks all! Yes this phase has passed! I enjoy writing sad love poems though. Also nature is one of my favorites. Thank you for the concern though. -Scott
PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
Posts 451
California
4 posted 2004-05-08 12:53 PM


I felt such sadness in your words. It made me think of special people who are now gone from my life. You have a wonderful talent for expressing your feelings. I do hope and pray things are better.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Isobel
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since 2004-01-17
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Qld, Australia
5 posted 2004-05-10 08:24 AM


rainingwithsun:  Another lovely poem.  Sad though.  When hearts are broken it is hard to see the light of day.

Love Isobel ox


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