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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2004-04-19 05:27 PM


Specialist

whispers in the dark
supernatural swirl of air
curtains move on stillest night.
away, far away, helping
standing guard at shared waterfall
whispers come for the body.

stealing away the flesh
while spirit is so busy
such a bold movement.
they come these thieves
defenses never suspected
whispers turned to gasping.

whispers coil in angry swirls
planned revenge, accounting
they are struck again, again.
Driven away by brightest
flashing deep in pale moonlight
double,razor edged sword.

stealing away, in utmost haste
pitiful whines, occasional scream
whispers scurry in full retreat.
Now then; back to business
seems there is a damsel in distress
indeed?...tis my specialty.


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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2004-04-20 02:20 PM


I'm not sure I understand in full, but who needs to, to enjoy.  Love, Joyce
aujussy wolf
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2 posted 2004-04-25 04:37 AM


Now then; back to business
seems there is a damsel in distress
indeed?...tis my specialty.


a grand ending sir tram
your style is one that is hard to master
good words

wolfman

Annie78
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here then there then back here
3 posted 2004-05-31 04:07 PM


You know husband of mine, your writing always stirs me, especially when I feel your pain that is so evidently my doing. I truly wish that I could undo the pain, only you will ever know the truth behind what drives me, making me forever a "damsel in distress"
Annie

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