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Trillium
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0 posted 2004-04-16 04:01 PM






Cloud Kisses

I've lived upon a high plateau
And watched clouds gather, far below,
To mass and swirl, just like a sea,
Completely isolating me
From everything that lay down there.
A feeling quite beyond compare!

Then some days, clouds would move up high.
Engulf my cabin, so that I
Could only see slow, moving gray
From every window, through the day!
I'd go outside to take a peek
And feel moist breath upon my cheek
And wonder if there were a few
Experiencing cloud kisses, too!


Betty Lou Hebert

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1 posted 2004-04-16 05:43 PM


Cloud kisses...what a wonderful way of looking at it.
Very much enjoyed this write.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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2 posted 2004-04-16 06:30 PM


Nancy:  It was a strange feeling to be completely engulfed in clouds.  When I was outside, it really did feel as though kisses were being rained upon me. Thanks.

Love
Betty Lou

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3 posted 2004-04-16 08:27 PM


Nice writing.  Joyce
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4 posted 2004-04-16 10:20 PM


Joyce: Thanks for reading.

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2004-04-17 02:38 PM


As always, I enjoyed another of your wonderful gifts of expression.
Love, Barb

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6 posted 2004-04-17 03:20 PM


Barb:  Thank you my friend!

Love
Betty Lou

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7 posted 2004-04-17 05:41 PM


Another lovely piece of writing Betty Lou that was so very much enjoyed.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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8 posted 2004-04-17 05:47 PM


Dear Sue:  

Thanks and I always enjoy hearing from you.

Love
Betty Lou

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9 posted 2004-04-18 03:57 AM


Dear Beey Lou,
What a lovely poem you wrote. It made me want to go outside and experience Cloud Kisses for myself. And thank you also for making me feel so welcome here.

Love,
Patricia

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10 posted 2004-04-18 09:30 AM


BettyLou~
You are beautiful ... and this is an outstanding piece of your beautiful thoughts~
I love you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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11 posted 2004-04-18 03:10 PM


stunningly beautiful!
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12 posted 2004-04-18 04:05 PM


Patricia:  Thanks for your nice reply to my poem.  I know we will enjoy your poetry and hope you will stick around.

Love
Betty Lou

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13 posted 2004-04-18 04:06 PM


Dear Marge:

Thank you for your lovely words and for your love!

Betty Lou

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14 posted 2004-04-18 04:07 PM


passing shadows:

So nice to hear from you and thanks for reading.

Love
Betty Lou

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15 posted 2004-04-19 12:14 PM


I love the message in this, wonderfully done, B.

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16 posted 2004-04-19 01:54 PM


Sparticus:  Thank you and nice to hear from you!

Betty Lou Hebert

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17 posted 2004-04-22 09:16 AM


Dear Betty Lou

You certainly give us a new way of looking at things.  Very nice indeed.

Love Isobel ox


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18 posted 2004-04-22 11:57 AM


Trillium,

I love looking at the clouds. This is beautiful.

                          Dawn

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19 posted 2004-04-22 05:10 PM


Isobel:

When we lived at Scossa, there were days when we were enveloped in clouds.  It was 5,600 ft. on the side of a mountain and it was strange to look out the windows and see clouds moving by on each side of the house.

Love
Betty Lou

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20 posted 2004-04-22 05:11 PM


DawnG:  Thanks for reading.  I enjoyed hearing from you.

Betty Lou Hebert

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21 posted 2004-04-22 10:25 PM


Trillium
been there done that and always wanna go back! A beautiful experience, put to words!
pictureme :-)

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22 posted 2004-04-23 03:19 PM


pictureme:  I'm glad to hear you have shared this same experience.

Betty Lou Hebert

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