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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2004-04-16 05:39 AM

Proudly he perched there
with his new Spring vest so red
Majestic and plump

The water fountain
was singing her Siren's song
he could not resist

So he took the plunge
loosing all his dignity
Robins morning bath

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-04-16 09:55 AM

Ellie~
What a lovely greet of morning~
It is just SO GOOD to have your lovely thoughts back with us~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2004-04-16 10:00 AM

This is delightful Ellie. Love, Joyce

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2004-04-16 03:55 PM

Dear ellie:

I could picture every movement in this lovely trilogy! You are a master of verse!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

4 posted 2004-04-19 01:03 AM

Dear Ellie,

Wonderfully delightful! I enjoyed this Haiku very much.

Patricia

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-04-19 08:51 AM

Wonderful Ellie!
Oh my these are fantastic!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Sparticus
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since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

6 posted 2004-04-19 12:15 PM

Lovely Spring poem, Ellie

Sparticus

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

7 posted 2004-04-20 12:08 PM

Ellie,
This is wonderful! Robin, the sweet manifestation of Spring. WRITE ON!

Dennis :^)

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

8 posted 2004-05-15 07:34 AM

Oh the joy of nature! Love your poem!

Deb

Beasley
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since 2003-11-28

Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA

9 posted 2004-05-15 08:22 AM

This is really a neat poem, Ellie.
Love, Barb

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-05-16 04:29 AM

nice picture of the season

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

11 posted 2004-05-16 11:04 AM

dEar ellie, this is cute! sprightly!

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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12 posted 2004-05-16 07:39 PM

Sweet! Very nice, Ellie!

rainingwithsun
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since 2004-05-06

Posts 19
Toledo, Ohio USA

13 posted 2004-05-17 12:10 PM

This is an absolutely beautiful haiku! I have never saw one with a second and third verse yet you have made it work! Very well written! -Scott

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