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wings of the moon
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0 posted 2004-04-12 05:16 PM


I think the weather is against me.

In Brittany I would shout at the waves:
”stop! Listen to me!”  
I felt they would.
The pasty lips closing just at my feet,
And the sand spoilt gently by a dribble.

Here, scuttling down the step stones, the rain is foreign.
It tastes different without me.
Coiled and dropped is another string of strawberry blond.
Please accept my coin.  

Laugh at the flat-headed stickmen in hill town.
At least they don’t know wells aren’t magical.
They never glance up at us while we slide,
or at the earth eroding behind our trainers.


© Copyright 2004 Claire Lucille - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-04-12 06:01 PM


CLAIRE !!!
Sooooooooo good to see you gracing our Pub again~

Ponderous penning you've given us~
Delightful to read you~

Thanks for coming 'home'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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wings of the moon
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2 posted 2004-04-12 06:04 PM


Thanks Marge a bit melodramatic it is, though...(the poem that is)

nice to see you again

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

junemac
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3 posted 2004-04-12 06:18 PM


hello there,
I love your descriptions here. Enjoyed the read and you certainly have a good way with words.

Here, scuttling down the step stones, the rain is foreign.
It tastes different without me.
Coiled and dropped is another string of strawberry blond.
Please accept my coin.  


hugs june x

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4 posted 2004-04-13 05:03 PM


wings of the moon:  Thanks for posting this
unusual and enjoyable poem.  Hope you will appear on a regular basis!

Betty Lou Hebert

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