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DeviantMechanic
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 21
Oak Grove, KY

0 posted 2004-03-27 03:38 PM


you have been taken down
to the depths of sorrow and sympathy
and in there your pain
once hidden is now set free
you have been lifted up
to the heights of love and joy
and in there your inner beauty
was used as a toy
so I leave you here in the twain
and offer mixed love and pain
for it is here, my love, in the middle
that life displays the meaningful riddle
you are confused now
as so you should be
I only offer you life
and its greatest mystery
for if we are to know
if we were to see
we would forgo the bad that
made us so happy


© Copyright 2004 Mathew W. Jones - All Rights Reserved
Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes
1 posted 2004-03-27 04:15 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope you like it here as much as we will enjoy reading more of your work. This is a very good write, and I look forward to seeing your name here again.

Check your e-mail for a special greeting.

Some people are like Slinkies . . . not really good for anything, but you still can't help but smile when you see one tumble down the stairs...

Trillium
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Member Patricius
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Idaho, USA
2 posted 2004-03-27 05:23 PM


Deviant Mechanic;  Nice to see you posting here at Passions.  I liked your poem and will look forward to reading more.

Betty Lou Hebert

Denise
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3 posted 2004-03-28 10:40 AM


Welcome to Passions, DM! I enjoyed your poem and think it embodies much wisdom. I look forward to reading more from you.

Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-03-28 02:01 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS MATHEW!
I very much enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 2004-03-28 06:31 PM


Matthew~
You turn the poetry wrench extremely well~

Welcome to the friendliest Corner Pub on the Internet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Joyce Johnson
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Washington State
6 posted 2004-03-30 02:23 PM


Welcome to our corner.  Hope to see more of your lovely poetry.  Joyce
Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...
7 posted 2004-04-01 09:33 AM


~~~we would forgo the bad that
made us so happy~~~
indeed Mat!
very much enjoyed reading your thoughts,son!
hopefully looking forward to many more...
something else we can share besides your Mama? LOL some things just run in the family, eh?

love and hugz
D

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2004-04-01 11:29 AM



Welcome to Passions!

Annie78
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 469
here then there then back here
9 posted 2004-11-18 07:50 AM


son,
your mama is very proud of you and will be glad when you are done with them dang helicopters. welcome and don't be shy
mama loves you mostest
annie78

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2004-11-21 05:32 AM


loved the first post! Welcome!
Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
11 posted 2004-11-22 12:04 PM


Wonderful!

this poem was music to my ears (you know what I meant I hope) and I look forward to seeing more from you


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