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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-03-18 01:45 AM



stars align to the precise angle
my motions had a glow once
now the business must be done
tilt the axis slightly slide
move my pride a bit to the side
tried to reside but a tear left my eye
so much i just poured out , but not enough
or maybe too much ....out of luck
dumbstruck
tumbleweeds in the streets  she said
i lost her then , i sure lost her now
then if i am  found what next
hearing  that song of sweet winds
branches make me bend
this will never end

.......
JDW III

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1 posted 2004-03-18 02:13 AM


oh my, this has left me feeling very sad

you write so lovely i sometimes dont know if i should cheer or cry....

i hope those tumbleweeds show you the way home...she may be lost to you...but, you still speak sweetly.

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2 posted 2004-03-18 06:03 PM


very nice sad poem
aujussy wolf
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3 posted 2004-03-18 10:36 PM


ahh thank you both for the replys , yeah i was feeling that way for sure not to sad though ....thanks again

.......
JDW III

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4 posted 2004-03-21 07:42 PM


took me awhile to get over here, but I am glad I stopped in to find you here
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5 posted 2004-03-21 09:02 PM


lol yeah it took me awhile to post anything in here , the ol' pub , low lighting , smokey tunes rolling in the background ....
i'm happy you did find these though , some are a bit sad ...i think the pubs a good place for certain writes ,big hugs d...there is always tomorrow babe ... ,james

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6 posted 2004-03-27 03:42 PM


hi im new here i would just like to say that the depth of your plight has touched the bottom of my soul and inspired feelings long ago lost. thank you for your wonderful post.
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7 posted 2004-03-28 10:47 AM


The sadness definitely came through, James. Well done! I hope you enjoy the Pub!
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8 posted 2004-03-28 06:38 PM


James~
ANOTHER great read~

'tilt the axis slightly slide
move my pride a bit to the side'


*sigh* ... I adore that thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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